Talk:Supergirl (Stefania song)/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Grk1011 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Paparazzzi (talk · contribs) 23:30, 18 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Lead and infobox

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  • In the infobox, remove what's in bold "Arcade (Pavlos Manolis, Anastasios Rammos, Diverno, Gabriel Russell)"
  • Add and Alt description to the artwork

Background and composition

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  • "The song encourages teenagers to believe in themselves and pursue their dreams, inspired by Stefania's daily struggles to combine her duties as a student while pursuing her dream of singing"... Mention in the article who said the song was about "teenagers to believe in themselves"

Promotion

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  • "she found Greek paparazzi..." reword this, it sounds awkward

References

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  • Ref 2 never claims the music video was filmed in Athens
  • Just to note: an apparent copy-right violation of 52% from this Italian blog, which actually seems they copy-pasted portions of this article, so no problem here

Additional comments and verdict

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  • Add a section about the credits. I look at the Credits at Tidal but they only show the composers and lyricists, maybe you can find a Greek database or something like that
  • @Paparazzzi: I've made all of the changes you've requested, however, I am a bit puzzled by the sourcing for the credits. The only reliable source I have found is in a video description posted by the singer here. Being 2020, I don't believe there to be a physical single with liner notes, most likely just a promo disc if anything. Thoughts on how I should format a reference? Grk1011 (talk) 01:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
I ended up adding the reference myself. Since my comments have been addressed, I'm going to pass this article. Congratulations! --Paparazzzi (talk) 02:47, 21 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
Awesome, thank you! Grk1011 (talk) 03:01, 21 April 2020 (UTC)Reply