Talk:Superunknown/GA1

GA Review

Hey there - just a few notes on getting this to GA standard.

• "Regarding the change in producer, guitarist Kim Thayil said, "We just thought we'd go for a change." - context - who were the previous producers? The casual reader (eg. me) isn't aware it's their first time with Beinhorn or anything like that.
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 13:53, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
• "The individual band members would work on material on their own and then bring in demos which the other band members would help work on." - the repetition here "band members" and "work on" is a bit annoying...
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 13:57, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
• Second and third paragraphs of the "Recording" section contains a lot of "the band..."... can you get some variety ("Soundgarden...", "they....")?
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 14:03, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
• Hmm... only the release date for one of the singles is known? (infobox)
  • Unfortunately, yes.-5- (talk) 14:04, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
• "The song "Spoonman" is notable for featuring a performance by Artis the Spoonman..." - sources for this paragraph?
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 14:46, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
• In the Release and reception section can you link the songs the first time you name them?
  • Addressed.-5- (talk) 16:14, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
• Do you really need the singles charts table?
  • As a completist, I'm going to have to say yes.-5- (talk) 14:46, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

Yeah, that's about it. Please leave me a note when done... cheers. —Giggy 11:54, 1 August 2008 (UTC)