Talk:Superunknown/GA1

Latest comment: 16 years ago by -5- in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Hey there - just a few notes on getting this to GA standard.

  • "Regarding the change in producer, guitarist Kim Thayil said, "We just thought we'd go for a change." - context - who were the previous producers? The casual reader (eg. me) isn't aware it's their first time with Beinhorn or anything like that.
  • "The individual band members would work on material on their own and then bring in demos which the other band members would help work on." - the repetition here "band members" and "work on" is a bit annoying...
  • Second and third paragraphs of the "Recording" section contains a lot of "the band..."... can you get some variety ("Soundgarden...", "they....")?
  • Hmm... only the release date for one of the singles is known? (infobox)
  • "The song "Spoonman" is notable for featuring a performance by Artis the Spoonman..." - sources for this paragraph?
  • In the Release and reception section can you link the songs the first time you name them?
  • Do you really need the singles charts table?

Yeah, that's about it. Please leave me a note when done... cheers. —Giggy 11:54, 1 August 2008 (UTC)Reply