Talk:Suriname at the 2016 Summer Paralympics

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 18:33, 6 October 2018 (UTC)Reply


  • "His took part in two athletics tournaments" His took part is wrong, and I think we usually would use the word "events" rather than "tournaments"
  • "and best performance at these Paralympics was seventh overall in the men's 100 metres T12 event and did not progress to the final since only the top four were permitted in that stage." Could use a couple more "his"s in here. Also "permitted to advance to that stage" is how I'd phrase it.
  • Ref 6 has an author available.
  • BQS? AQS? What do they mean?
  • "Since only the top four" Needs something like "overall" or "from all heats".
  • Can we get note one to appear in a single column somehow? It's splitting over two columns on my screen.