Talk:Sustainable Development Goal 9

This article was nominated for deletion on 24 September 2020. The result of the discussion was speedy keep.

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject International development, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of international development, including such areas as appropriate technology, microfinance and social issues, on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.International developmentWikipedia:WikiProject International developmentTemplate:WikiProject International developmentInternational development articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the importance scale.

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject International relations, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of International relations on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.International relationsWikipedia:WikiProject International relationsTemplate:WikiProject International relationsInternational relations articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	This article is supported by WikiProject United Nations.

Sanitation Low‑importance

	This article is within the scope of WikiProject Sanitation, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Sanitation on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SanitationWikipedia:WikiProject SanitationTemplate:WikiProject Sanitationsanitation articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.

To do list

Latest comment: 4 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

These are improvements that could be made if anyone has time:

Provide more information (discussion, progress) for each indicator. Scour all the links on the HLPF website.
Add some more maps (from SDG Tracker website / Wikimedia Commons) and images (Wikimedia Commons)
Improve the flow of text in the background section because some of it reads like just a collection of facts but without good prose and flow.
Improve lead to make it a better summary of the article
Find any other good progress reports for SDG 9.
Provide more detail and references to the section on "linkages with other SDGs"
Find more progress information for some of the indicators which so far don't have progress information provided.
Add more wikilinks to other articles in Wikipedia and vice versa.
Find Wikipedia articles that explain some of the key concepts that are used in the SDG 9 article. We should not have to created new articles - often times they exist but just under different names. EMsmile (talk) EMsmile (talk) 07:43, 9 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

Latest comment: 4 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

I just expanded the background, added wikilinks, made the sentences simple to laypersons.Olabideen (talk)

Rewrote the lead to provide context on the Goal and provide potential hooks for future content development. 2030 SDGs (talk) 02:48, 25 September 2020 (UTC)Reply