Talk:Suzanne Lenglen/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Kosack in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 07:11, 25 February 2020 (UTC)Reply


I'll pick this one up, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 07:11, 25 February 2020 (UTC)Reply

Initial review

Lead

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Early life and background

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Maiden titles

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  • "After an opening round default", matches ending default are mentioned several times in the text but I'm not really sure what you mean by default. I assume it's the withdrawal of her opponent? Is there a relevant link?
  • "an American who moved to England a year earlier", who had moved perhaps? The tense sounds a little off in the current form I would say.

World Hard Court champion

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World War I hiatus

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  • "some instances had the opportunity to play singles matches against male players", does the source mention if she won any of these matches. No doubt they were only Exhibition matches but it would be interesting to note if she did win matches over male players.

Classic Wimbledon final

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Start of 179-match win streak

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Wimbledon misunderstanding

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United States professional tour

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British professional tour

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Fallout

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Lenglen vs. Mallory

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Other rivals

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Mythical persona

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Personal life

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Career statistics

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References

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This is what I picked out on an initial run through. I've performed some minor grammatical fixes where the mistakes were obvious. Feel free to review them though if you wish. A nice article overall on an interesting character. Placed on hold while the points above are addressed. Kosack (talk) 19:32, 26 February 2020 (UTC)Reply

This has been on hold for nearly two weeks now. Most of the issues have been addressed but there appears to be one or two outstanding. Are there any issues with those? Kosack (talk) 08:45, 8 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the review and the time to go through such a long article, Kosack! Sorry for the delay, I had a few of these reviews to address at once. I believe I took care of everything above. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 09:50, 10 March 2020 (UTC)Reply
No problem, didn't mean to rush you. This is an extremely thorough article and a nice piece of work. I'm happy it meets the GA criteria, promoting. Kosack (talk) 09:31, 12 March 2020 (UTC)Reply