Talk:Swaziland at the 2016 Summer Olympics

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:30, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

Going to review. MWright96 (talk) 19:30, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• no dead links
• Everything stated in the article is cited correctly

Lede

• Wildcard should be one word as in the body

Background

• Delink West Germany in the lede and background section
• Do the same for Soviet Union
• Change "100 m" and "200 m" to 100 metres and 200 metres for the ordinary reader - also same issue is in the lede
• Delink Swaziland Olympic and Commonwealth Games Association at the second instance it is mentioned

Athletics

• "he finished sixth within his heat of the men's 200 m" - 200 metres
• Add how Ndzinisa qualified for Rio 2016.
• "He finished ahead of Levi Cadogan of Barbados (21.02 seconds) and Tega Odele of Ghana (21.25 seconds)" - Ghana's Tega Odele
• "with a time of 12.49." - 12.49 seconds
• "Since she failed to finish in the two two places," - first

Notes

• Italicise Times of Swaziland
• Remove the second and third wikilinks to Sports Reference
• Added a link to Swazi Observer

Must say this was a good read. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:37, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: Thanks again for reviewing; I've made those modifications and added the expansion as requested. Miyagawa (talk) 22:45, 24 October 2016 (UTC)

@Miyagawa: Good. Promoting to GA. MWright96 (talk) 05:48, 25 October 2016 (UTC)

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