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Looks like this story is going to have more legs than I realized. I'll be on the lookout for more references; I've already seen a lot more on it than I originally thought existed. I am withdrawing my proposed deletion. /Blaxthos (talk) 05:52, 17 November 2007 (UTC)
Misc. edits
editI removed the Symmes interview. More and more people are weighing in through media interviews, etc. and it becomes very tangential. I suggest that we keep it to the parties themselves or their spokespeople. There'll be plenty to fill up an article soon enough. --EECEE (talk) 06:54, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
- OK, I'm just going to stick it here for now, just in case anyone else thinks it is relevant.
Weymouth Symmes, the treasurer of the Swift Vets and POWs for Truth, called Kerry a fool for accepting the challenge, declaring that Pickens had made "a safe bet" and that Kerry "should put his money where his mouth is."[1]
-- Kendrick7talk 18:13, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
Looks good Kendrick7. I notice that you put back the "6 November" etc. dating style. I thought the more conversational and usual "November 6" style works better in a Wiki article, but possibly you have your reasons?
I also removed what seemed to amount to personal observations, such as both men being reported to be "very rich" and Kerry's letter "ensuring that a showdown will occur." The first observation seems at best tangential, and the second is speculation. It you don't agree, I'm open to discussion.
By the way, I'm not sure how Tyrell's blog rant would qualify as any sort of objective evidence for anything. Not sure if you're the one who included it...if not, apologies for directing this comment to you. --EECEE (talk) 19:25, 21 November 2007 (UTC)
- Not sure who Tyrell is. I have thought it worth mentioning, somehow, that both men are rich enough to afford the bets. Not all our readers are going to know that off the bat. I simply grabbed the first source I found that reflected that; which seemed pretty rantful but I thought could be relied on for that much. I agree that my quote from the Boston Globe article could be seen as speculation, though, and I agree with your edit removing it.
- Ugh, date formats, I don't want to argue about date formats. I use the style I'm used to from more international articles; I believe its the more prevalent style on wikipedia overall. I don't work on a lot of domestic articles outside of current events. I didn't have to revert you as most readers here will be Americans; it's just force of habit. -- Kendrick7talk 05:28, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
- Hi Kendrick7. Thanks for your response. Emmett Tyrell wrote the American Spectator blog piece you linked to. First, linking to an opinion piece isn't really proof of the point. Second, it's still a personal conclusion that isn't really encyclopedic in tone, in much the same way as saying, "both men have big public relations teams" or "both men know how to be on a stage" would not be a proper addition to an article. --EECEE (talk) 07:29, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
References
- ^ Kelly, Jamie (2007-11-18). "$1 million at stake in Swift Boat, Kerry bet". The Missoulian.
Hannity and Colmes interview with Pickens
edit- "Hannity & Colmes: T. Boone Pickens on $1 Million Challenge to Sen. John Kerry". transcript. Fox News. 2007-11-19. Retrieved 2007-11-22.
I see this is in the article as an external link (I templatized it). It is probably more appropriate if it is rolled into the article as a source, rather than as an EL. If someone has the time, go for it. Otherwise, I'll try to get around to it eventually. - Crockspot (talk) 00:06, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
- Well, I had added this in the "Pickens response" paragraph: "In a subsequent television appearance, Pickens restated his claim that the challenge only applied to SBVT ads." But that was deleted and changed to an external link Nov. 21...I think Kendrick felt it was secondary or something. I don't have strong feelings one way or the other, except that everything in the article should be short and concise. --EECEE (talk) 07:06, 23 November 2007 (UTC)
- It's not clear that he was restating the claim and at the time I couldn't come up with a better gloss of the transcript. Feel free to readd something along the lines of the original; sorry for the confusion. -- Kendrick7talk 05:15, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
- That's true. Perhaps I should have said he "restated the claim made in his letter, that the challenge only applied to SBVT ads." --EECEE (talk) 07:31, 24 November 2007 (UTC)
Is this really notable?
editIt doesn't look much like it to me; more like simple political posturing from both sides than any serious controversy. There has been no follow-up on the story since November, and I doubt there will be. If nothing further happens with this story, I suggest that this page be merged into Swift Boat Veterans for Truth or John Kerry military service controversy. Terraxos (talk) 05:27, 12 January 2008 (UTC)
- It really is entirely independent of those articles. There are sources given. -- Kendrick7talk 07:38, 12 January 2008 (UTC)
- Agree with Kendrick7. /Blaxthos ( t / c ) 08:24, 12 January 2008 (UTC)
- I agree with you both. Besides, the other two articles are long enough as it is. --EECEE (talk) 07:53, 13 January 2008 (UTC)
- Many months later (oops, I forgot I posted this message in the first place)... consider the statement above retracted. This topic clearly has independent notability, and I was wrong to suggest it should be merged. Terraxos (talk) 00:21, 23 August 2008 (UTC)
With the benefit of now 2 years for reflection, this article documents a rather (in hindsight) insignificant skirmish in the Swiftvet v. Kerry story and, IMHO, hardly merits independent article treatment. It should be considered for AfD as it is already adequately treated in the T. Boone Pickens article. Comments?— Preceding unsigned comment added by JakeInJoisey (talk • contribs)
- Notability does not decay over time; something is notable or it isn't. Judging by the responses last time around, consensus is clear. Please also note that the original author of this thread retracted his statement, noting it "clearly has independent notability". //Blaxthos ( t / c ) 22:27, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
Letter to Pickens
editI just added a reference to the letter to Pickens from a group seeking the $1 million. Should that letter be added to Wikisource. (I am clueless about the conventions and procedures on Wikisource.) David.Kane (talk) 12:58, 16 September 2008 (UTC)