Talk:Swing Left

Wiki Education assignment: Civic Technology

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2022 and 30 November 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): SeenaBerkeley (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Malak8462000.

— Assignment last updated by DrPronoun (talk) 06:55, 11 October 2022 (UTC)

Bibliography

Hello!

This is my assigned article for Wiki Education! I plan on expanding and organizing it to both include more information, as well as make information easier to find. I hope to expand more on the History, Business Model, Direct Impact, Funding, Expenditures, etc..

I was hoping to use some of these sources to help, please feel free to give me any feedback regarding my bibliography!

https://www.opensecrets.org/political-action-committees-pacs//C00632133/donors/2018

https://www.nytimes.com/2018/07/20/business/swing-left-primary-campaigns.html

https://www.fec.gov/data/disbursements/?two_year_transaction_period=2018&cycle=2018&data_type=processed&committee_id=C00632133&recipient_name=C00670034&min_date=01/01/2017&max_date=11/28/2018&line_number=F3X-23

https://www.opensecrets.org/pacs/expenditures.php?cycle=2018&cmte=C00632133

I also would like to measure impact, how ever lots of the numbers relating to impact Swing Left has made falls directly on their website and is not widely available on other sources, how would you recommend I go about using an SPS to relay relevant information?

SeenaBerkeley (talk) 00:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

This wikipedia page is filled with the basic information anyone needs to understand what Swing Left is and what it represents. I enjoyed the fact that the whole page had a neutral tone. I also liked how for some of the words that I wouldn't have known, they were linked to another wikipedia page that explained what it was. The one thing that could be improved is the amount of information present. There was only one heading with less than 4 paragraphs of information. Maybe the editor could add another heading that has to do with current accomplishments or something along those lines and then have the introduction have less information on what Swing Left has accomplished and more on just basic information like who created it and when and if they are for profit or non profit. Overall, all the information was constantly cited in the correct way which was a positive. Malak8462000 (talk) 21:49, 26 October 2022 (UTC)