Talk:Tajikistan at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:04, 13 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Shall be reviewing this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:04, 13 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Background

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  • "The National Olympic Committee of the Republic of Tajikistan was first recognized in 1993," - first recognized by the International Olympic Committee in 1993
  • "The nation has never won a WInter Olympics medal." - change to country for variety
  • "Alisher Kudratov, an alpine skier who was not competing in these Olympics was chosen" - add a comma between "Olympics" and "was"

Alpine skiing

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  • "In the single-run race, he posted a time of 2 minutes and 4 seconds, which placed him 59th and last among the competitors who finished the race." - competition or event to avoid reptition of the word in bold
  • "His combined time of 3 minute and 9 seconds" - minutes

Good work here. There was nothing too major that I discovered during my read-through. MWright96 (talk) 14:16, 13 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, MWright96, everything has been addressed. Courcelles (talk) 15:05, 13 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Courcelles: Good good. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 15:56, 13 May 2018 (UTC)Reply