Talk:Take On Me/GA1

GA Review

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Hello, I will be reviewing this article. Check back in a few days for my full comments, and review! CarpetCrawler (talk) 08:50, 22 February 2009 (UTC)

So far, the article looks fantastic! I will give it another look later, but it is nicely referenced and written. The sections about the two more famous covers are also very accurately sourced, which is something you don't see very often. I really only have two concerns.

- In the background section, "In 1981 the band produced a whole LP, for which all of the music was composed by the group themselves, most of it being written by Waaktaar." Does this LP have a link on Wikipedia?

I searched in a-ha's webpage and found nothing, I even searched in the norwegian article of a-ha, I don't think there is much info on the net about Bridges or the LP, however i found the LP's name: "Fakkeltog". Should I add this to the article?

That would be a fantastic addition!

- The summary of the second video music looks a little too detailed and wordy for me. I'm not saying that you should strip it down to nothing, but some Wiki users might be discouraged to read it from its large size. Overall however, it's a very interesting section.

Ok I will try to trim it a little.

OK, let me know when you finish!

That's all so far, though. It's a very insightful article, and I will give it another look through after the above concerns are addressed. Have a good day! CarpetCrawler (talk) 21:04, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing and enjoying the article. I will work on the comments you made. Regards. Frcm1988 (talk) 21:51, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

You're welcome, and let me know on my talkpage when you finish the copyediting of the music video section! CarpetCrawler (talk) 22:01, 25 February 2009 (UTC)

Everything looks good. Congratulations! The article has passed! I commend you for your excellent and hard work! CarpetCrawler (talk) 21:44, 26 February 2009 (UTC)