Talk:Tan Kah Kee MRT station/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by ZKang123 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:24, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "to its present name through" -> "to Tan Kah Kee"
- Done
- ""as the name was viewed" -> "as it was viewed"
- Done
- "misleading" could you give us a clue in the lead as to why?
- Done
- "Bus, Taxi" ->"Bus, taxi"
- Done
- "at a sum of" value
- Done
- "US$240.66 million" 1 decimal place is fine.
- Done
- "have to be" had to be.
- Done
- "t was initially considered to underpin the gateways" -> "Underpinning the gateways was initially considered..."
- Done
- "in Q4 2012" in the fourth quarter of 2012
- Done
- "contractor had assured that it would finish the construction" this is obvious unless you mean they assured that after going into insolvency?
- Done replaced to: as the construction was going well by then
- "As the LTA seek for a new contractor, the contractor for Beauty World station," unclear, repetitive, link?
- Done
- "400 workers affected..." avoid starting sentences with a numeral.
- Done
- "US$177.42" no decimal places here.
- Done
- "was raised by" increased.
- Done
- "breakers, to break up" repetitive.
- Done
- "works completed by 95%" -> "works 95% complete."
- Done
- "segment will open on" would.
- Done
- "other DTL Stage 2 stations" -> DTL2
- Done
- "Exit A of this station" -> "Exit A of Tan Kah Kee station"
- Done
- "a road nearby." -> "a nearby road"
- Done
- "it has the" had
- Done
- "Then principal of the school" hyphenate.
- Done
- "congratulated the station name" you normally congratulate someone.
- Done replaced with "praise"
- "most votes through the voting system" no need for "through the voting system"
- Done
- "Road[1] and" move to behind punctuation.
- Done
- List of schools here is different from that in the lead, and some linked, some not.
- Well in the body there are more schools mentioned than those in the lead.
- Link headways.
- Done
- "be a grand yet compelling structure, to reflect the youthful ingenuity" etc etc brochure speak, needs copyedit.
- Done by Epicgenius
- Plenty of spaced hyphens, should be en-dashes.
- Done
- Ref 8 doesn't link Straits Times but ref 11 does...
- Done
- Ref 35 is LTA ref 35 is lta.gov.sg etc
- Done replaced all to Land Transport Authority
- Ref 24 it's a work not a publisher.
- Done
- Ref 41 should be pp.
That's all I have, so it's on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:50, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Addressed most of the points above.--ZKang123 (talk) 02:11, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
- Note [A] needs to be referenced. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:31, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
- ZKang123 just this last point... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:12, 26 March 2021 (UTC)
Ok done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:42, 27 March 2021 (UTC)