Talk:Tanzania at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:56, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 02:56, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

Looking forward to it! It's a little lighter than I normally like before I nominate for GA, but I think I've squeezed what I can out of it... what bothers me most is the placement of the image... I know that that isn't really part of the GA review, but if you can make a suggestion on that, I would appreciate it. On my monitor at least, it looks terrible no matter what it goes. Canadian Paul 16:47, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

Tried to find an alternative for the pick, both moving it to the right and making a gap, but neither looked good (the gap might work on lower resolution comps, but not mine). As is is probably the best option we got. Anyway, here's what I found:

• "after testing positive for banned substances at the 2014 Commonwelath Games" Commonwealth misspelled, but more curiously, if she got a three-year ban in 2014 how did she compete in 2016 here? The source says it expired in early 2016, so maybe add that so others aren't confused.
• "to send on judoka" to send one

I'll put the article on hold and pass when the two issues are fixed. Wizardman 15:47, 10 December 2016 (UTC)

Presumably the three-year suspension was retroactive, i.e. she lost her previous year of results and was barred for another two, but since that's speculation, I've adjusted the sentence so that it is clearer and made the other fixes. Thanks for the review! Canadian Paul 23:38, 10 December 2016 (UTC)

Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 01:06, 11 December 2016 (UTC)