Talk:Taylor Swift–Ticketmaster controversy/GA1
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 07:40, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
- I will take this on. Due to the size, it might take me a little while and multiple rounds so please bear with me. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:40, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
- As per WP:MOSLEADCITE, there should be no citations in the lede.
- But, as it also says "all quotations must include an inline citation to a reliable source that directly supports it." ℛonherry☘ 16:43, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- "Numerous fans and consumer groups alleged that Ticketmaster is deceitful", is or were?
- I agree that it should be past tense, but shouldn't it be "was" instead of "were"? Ticketmaster has been referred to as a singular entity throughout the articles, just like in the sources. ℛonherry☘ 16:45, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- As per MOS:ACRO1STUSE, the United Kingdom should be spelt out first and then UK/British afterwards (not U.K.)
- "Ticketmaster was a subject", "a subject" or "the subject"?
- "both Ticketmaster and Live Nation received backlash and media attention", from whom?
- In the Taylor Swift section, scalpers shouldn't be linked as it was already linked in the earlier Company section.
- "either completely logged out or in a queue 2,000-plus people strong that appeared frozen.", who said that? Also per MOS:PF, the punctuation should be at the end.
- "trust an outside entity with these relationships and loyalties", inline cite needed
- More to come. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 17:17, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
- Why are the lawsuit sections in bullet points? As per WP:BULLET, it says "They are not appropriate for large paragraphs"
- Same for political sections
- What is "Tickets today" and why is there no other mention of it in the article? As would be expected for a section header
- It's a secondary platform that Ticketmaster used to sell the remaining tickets before the website crashed. It was their solution to the crisis, apparently. ℛonherry☘ 16:55, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- What area does AOC represent in the House?
- Same for Pascrel and all other House reps and Senators
- I've mentioned Pascrel and AOC's districts now. For those who hold bigger offices, like the chair of a committee, I think their biggest designation is enough, like in Klobuchar's case? ℛonherry☘ 17:08, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- Should be "United States Attorney General" in full
- Need an inline citation for the "Grilled" line or it comes across as WP:POV
- Federal and State legislature sections, BULLET again.
- same for Further Controversy
- Note 3 needs a citation for the list of politicians.
- More to come. I Will try to review the references tomorrow. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 07:34, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
- @The C of E: Done all, except those that've raised some questions about. ℛonherry☘ 17:21, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry for the delay @Ronherry:, real life stuff got in the way. I was pleasantly surprised after reviewing the sources, that I could find no issues with those and I accept the explanations for the above. So even though I know little about Swift nor know any of her songs, I think this is very well written and I am happy to approve it for GA status. Well done. The C of E God Save the King! (talk) 08:38, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you very much! ℛonherry☘ 10:20, 7 March 2024 (UTC)