Talk:Ted Serong

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Anotherclown in topic Incorrect Tone
Good articleTed Serong has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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August 10, 2016Good article nomineeListed

Incorrect Tone

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This article is editorialised and does not read like an encyclopedia entry. It seems like it has been lifted from a biography or a magazine article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.37.186.94 (talk) 23:37, 27 October 2013 (UTC)Reply

FWIW this has been completely re-written now. Anotherclown (talk) 02:24, 21 July 2016 (UTC)Reply