Talk:Temple of the Five Immortals (Shiyan)
Latest comment: 2 years ago by NorthWu in topic Unclear reference to "war"
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editThis article is written in a rather unencyclopedic tone. It should be edited to cut out the personal opinion and focus on plainly describing the temple and its history. --Difference engine (talk) 01:25, 7 March 2015 (UTC)
Unclear reference to "war"
editHello,
There is a line in the text that goes as follows: "People who were seeking refuge from the war fled to this fortress". Which war? Or should this be "seeking refuge from war"?
Thanks,