Talk:Temporary gentlemen/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 08:50, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:50, 28 October 2020 (UTC)
- No DABs
- File:Robert Graves, Morrell.jpg needs a US pd tag if possible, but the URAA issue probably makes that moot.
- As it was a personal snapsnot that was only purchased by the NPG in 2003 and I could find no evidence if it being published previously I have used Template:PD-US-unpublished - Dumelow (talk) 08:02, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- File:Leslie Hore.jpg will be deleted for still being in US copyright, so delete it now
- Removed - Dumelow (talk) 08:02, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- a united commanding officer and the general What does this mean, both had to make a recommendation?
- I think it's a typo/autocorrect for "unit's commanding officer". I've reworded to address this and make it clearer (hopefully!) - Dumelow (talk) 08:02, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Be consistent about using title case for your article and book titles in the bibliography.
- Good point, think I've addressed this now - Dumelow (talk) 08:02, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- Superbly well done. All the literary refs showed that you did your homework on this one.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:12, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
- Thankyou for your review and kind words. It was a long time in the writing (started in 2012 and only put to mainspace in 2019, with some big gaps in between), but I enjoyed getting it there. I'd like to take it further if possible but it's a very long time since I put anything up at A-class review. Is it worth a shot or does you think further work is needed first? - Dumelow (talk) 08:02, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
- You've stats, quotes by famous people, what's not to like? I think that it's worthy of A class so I'd submit it. One thing, though, be sure to link the various ranks and unit sizes on their first appearance. You've done that for some, but not all.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:06, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
- Thankyou for your review and kind words. It was a long time in the writing (started in 2012 and only put to mainspace in 2019, with some big gaps in between), but I enjoyed getting it there. I'd like to take it further if possible but it's a very long time since I put anything up at A-class review. Is it worth a shot or does you think further work is needed first? - Dumelow (talk) 08:02, 29 November 2020 (UTC)