Talk:Tenor Saw

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Michig in topic Article needs clean-up

Article needs clean-up

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This article needs to be cleaned up. It's written like a fan site, heaping praise on the artist, with lines like "If you know "Ring the Alarm" (which you should), then you know Tenor Saw's style..." and "He died at 22 years of age; this was a great loss, not only for his family and friends, but for reggae music as well." It also makes extensive use of weasel words The article needs to be wikified. There are 6 links, only one of which is not in the first paragraph. The article's sources need to be cited in-text. Benandorsqueaks 03:41, 16 September 2007 (UTC)Reply

I believe these concerns have now been addressed.--Michig (talk) 12:20, 5 October 2008 (UTC)Reply