Talk:That Bass Tour/Archive 1

Archive 1

More sources from the deletion discussion

Here are some sources that got brought up in the recent deletion discussion and aren't in the article yet, so they might be useful for expanding the article. Thanks to the people who already integrated a bunch of sources found during that discussion!

• Midgarden, Cory (March 13, 2015). "This Is Why Meghan Trainor Won't Be Wearing A Swimsuit On Her 'That Bass Tour'". MTV News. Retrieved May 3, 2015.
• Paulson, Dave (March 21, 2015). "Meghan Trainor plays sold-out Nashville club". The Tennessean. Retrieved May 3, 2015.
• Pena, Xochitl (April 5, 2015). "Meghan Trainor in Palm Springs for The Dinah concert". The Desert Sun. Retrieved May 3, 2015.
• Pollock, David (April 9, 2015). "Meghan Trainor, O2 ABC Glasgow - review: A gleaming, crisp performer". The Independent. Retrieved May 3, 2015.
• Adejobi, Alicia (April 14, 2015). "Meghan Trainor tour review: Singer channels Rihanna Caribbean vibe at Shepherd's Bush gig". IB Times. Retrieved May 3, 2015 – via Yahoo News UK & Ireland.
• Aizlewood, John (April 14, 2015). "Meghan Trainor tour review: Bang Dem Sticks star spread happiness at Shepherd's Bush". London Evening Standard. Retrieved May 3, 2015.
• Hawksley, Rupert (April 14, 2015). "Meghan Trainor, Shepherd's Bush Empire, review: 'highly polished pop'". The Telegraph. Retrieved May 3, 2015.

Dreamyshade (talk) 01:05, 4 May 2015 (UTC)

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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This review is transcluded from Talk:That Bass Tour/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 08:46, 12 June 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this article.

Review

• is the first headlining → was the first headlining
• of her major label → reads like a bias and fan-written perspective
• and tour dates for Oceania, Europe, and Asia were also announced later. → with Oceanic, European and Asian dates announced afterwards.
• to support her major-label → Same as above
• and tickets went up for sale → and tickets were released
• were its → as its (HP is the only one you've mentioned, so it shouldn't read plural)
• includes fourteen → included fourteen (The tour has ended, so past tense should be being used throughout when talking about things like this)
• Portland Tribune‍ '​s Nicole DeCosta described Trainor's dance moves during the show as being "G-rated", and said that she felt that Trainor looked laid back.[7] Ashley Lee from The Hollywood Reporter said that the show's venue was "intima[te]", and that Trainor took advantage of this.[8] → This doesn't belong in this section, these are reviews.
• Critical reception section seems really short? Surely there are more reviews than this?
• For such a recent tour starring such a successful and written about singer I'm surprised at the short length of this article to be honest.
• What do you mean by "Dance to" in the Set list section?
• Publisher parameters not needed for the references anymore

Summary

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Outcome

On hold for 7 days. Please try and search for more reviews or articles about this tour. I'm sure there is more than this.  — Calvin999 19:16, 12 June 2015 (UTC)

I believe I fixed everything, let me know if I missed anything. I've tried adding more sources, but unfortunately the tour didn't receive that much noteworthy coverage. --Markhoris (talk) 20:19, 12 June 2015 (UTC)

I'm so surprised. Thought it would have garnered a lot.  — Calvin999 20:33, 12 June 2015 (UTC)

Pass or Fail:

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