Talk:The Amazing Maleeni/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 17:27, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Will review this soon. Ruby 2010/2013 17:27, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

• There is one dab link
• "Mulder and Scully learn that Maleeni had a twin brother, Albert Pinchbeck, who turns out to look exactly like that" - Like what?
• "Meanwhile, LaBonge finds a man named Cissy Alvarez who Maleeni owed money. LaBonge admits that he caused his head to fall off, and says that he will give the man the money he is owed if he helps him with his magic" - There's a lot of "he"s thrown around here; might be easier for readers if you repeat names
• ..."but the man shows that he has not legs..." - No legs?
• ..."true trick being performed - that everything involving..." - Format dash
• "The production crew discovered that Jay's production agency had not been informed and that he would be unable to shoot the episode" - This is a little unclear. Jay's production agency were not informed that he would be guest starring?
• "Anderson later stated that, because many of the lines were written in a tongue-in-cheek style, that she and David Duchovny said them in a humorous style." - too many uses of "that"
• Unlink United Kingdom and Ireland
• "Kenneth Silber from Space.com was critical of the episodes intricacy, writing..." - Episode's?

Otherwise, well done with the article. It was interesting to read. I'll place it on hold for seven days. Ruby 2010/2013 18:32, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for the review. I believe I have addressed all of your concerns.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 15 June 2012 (UTC)

Looks good. Passing for GA. Nice work! Ruby 2010/2013 03:53, 16 June 2012 (UTC)