Talk:The Beast (Neon Genesis Evangelion)
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Andrew Kent
editWho is this Andrew Kent fellow?--Vi Veri Veniversum Vivus Vici 00:23, 26 April 2007 (UTC)
- He's listed on ADV's DVDs as the writer of their subtitle script. Basically, he takes a literal translation and rewrites it so that it makes more sense in English. Xenofan 29A 21:18, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
Yoji name
editI checked the Kanji on this so-called "Yoji Enoto" from ADV's credits, and found that his name had the same kanji as Yoji Enokido. I think ADV made a mistake, and have reverted back to what it said before I altered it. Xenofan 29A 21:20, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
I'll be making the review of this article.Tintor2 (talk) 18:12, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
- No problems with the lead. However:
- Remember that in the body we are reintroducing the cast and terms so descriptions like Shinji's identity or Misato should be briefly explained.
- "Production began in September 1994, simultaneously with "Angel Attack", and ended in May 1995" needs to be more specific. "Production of the episode"?
- Movies should be given their year of release so "Sayonara Jupiter" could have it.
- Reception's mention of Anime News Network is elaborated in the next paragraph but no Newtype.
Anyway, good work with the article. @TeenAngels1234:.Tintor2 (talk) 19:48, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
- @Tintor2:
Done Technically speaking, Oguro wrote that articles/reviews for Newtype mentioned in the first paragraph. He generically praised "The Beast" animation, and I wanted to avoid the old direct-quotation-mode for prose reasons.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 21:19, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
