Talk:The Beginning and the End (Millennium)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:01, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Issues:

• Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
• Lede: For second paragraph, add "In the episode, "
• Lede: critics → television critics
• Reception: Fox Network → Fox network

That's all. Great work. TBrandley 21:20, 7 July 2012 (UTC)

Done and done. Thanks for the review! GRAPPLE X 21:28, 7 July 2012 (UTC)