Talk:The Boat Race 1937/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 12:04, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

Comments

Taking as read my usual bleat about false titles (Rickett, twice), there are two minor drafting points:

• Background
  • "The Light Blues had thirteen consecutive races coming into this year's event" – it looks as though "won" is missing before "thirteen".
• Race
  • " umpire Rickett started the race … A false start ensued, with umpire Rickett failing to hear…" – one "umpire" too many? Tim riley talk 12:04, 6 April 2015 (UTC)

Nothing to delay us there, though please tweak. Therefore:

Review summary

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Thanks Tim, I've addressed the comments you left. I very much appreciate your interest and ongoing support. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:33, 6 April 2015 (UTC)