Talk:The Boat Race 1954/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:29, 25 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll go ahead and tackle one more. Wizardman 02:29, 25 February 2015 (UTC)

Here's what I found:

• "and their boat club president H. M. C. Quick who was making his third consecutive appearance." comma after Quick
• " By the end of the first minute, the Dark Blues were a few feet ahead but the bend in the river favouring Cambridge, the crews were level by Craven Steps" Feels like it's missing a word somewhere, doesn't seem to flow right. Maybe "were a few feet ahead, but with the bend in the river..."

Article on hold, will pass when fixed. Wizardman 04:41, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

Hi Wizardman, thanks for that. I've made the adjustments as suggested. Cheers. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:09, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

Looks good, article passes. Wizardman 22:57, 26 February 2015 (UTC)