Talk:The Boat Race 1984

Latest comment: 10 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 13:42, 5 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'll conduct the review of this article. Seattle (talk) 13:42, 5 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

  • steered their boat into a moored barge can you link "barge"?
    • Funnily enough, I took a look at the article to make sure it was a universal (or near-enough universal) word, and saw American barges and British barges and thought "nah, no need to link", but linked anyway. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:31, 7 July 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • Rankov had left the university after completing his studies so it would have no impact on this year's race. perhaps a rewrite here, cut "so" and use a semi-colon. When I first read the sentence I interpreted "so it would have no impact" to mean that he left specifically left so that it wouldn't have an impact on the race.
  • Oxford's crew contained two Canadian brothers (the Evans twins, Mark and Michael), two Australians and an American cox No Americans on the Oxford side
  • The lead states both crews beat the existing course record. I think Oxford's time should be included in the "race" section if they also broke the record.

That's that. Seattle (talk) 01:48, 7 July 2014 (UTC)Reply