Talk:The Boat Race 1992/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Lemonade51 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 11:50, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
I'll review this...
- "Oxford went into the race as reigning champions, having won the 1990 race by two-and-a-quarter lengths", Oxford are reigning champions, so how does their victory two years before demonstrate this?
- "President of the Cambridge University Boat Club, Max Justicz, recalled the previous year's race", how about 'said of', as it reads to me like he summoned it.
- "Beefeater Gin sponsored the event. Prior to this year's event...", pedantic, but maybe replace BIB with 'Boat Race' to avoid repetition
- "Cambridge coach John Wilson lamented...", Wilson's full name already given, best to use surname thereafter.
No dead links, no dabs. No issues with the image license, and sources check out fine. Will pass once comments have been addressed. Lemonade51 (talk) 11:50, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
- All done I think. Thanks for your review, let me know if there's anything else I can do. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:28, 5 August 2014 (UTC)
- Have passed now, nice work. Lemonade51 (talk) 17:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)