Talk:The Boat Race 2008

Latest comment: 10 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 22:09, 7 July 2014 (UTC)Reply

Comments:
  • Oxford were clear pre-race favourites don't particularly care for "clear" here. Would prefer you use a quote to explain what the author/source said, or if there's a specific margin, but I don't like just "clear", reeks of WP:PEACOCK
  • Feel like I've seen Dowbiggin somewhere before, perhaps a note in the "background" section?
  • My last name is Monaghan! But on a serious note, the double-dagger in the footnotes doesn't have a corresponding double-dagger in the table, and one of the names is a typo (Monoaghan v. Monaghan).

Passable otherwise. Seattle (talk) 03:12, 16 July 2014 (UTC)Reply