Talk:The Broken Man/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 01:50, 28 December 2016 (UTC)

• Grabbing for a review in the next couple of days. Miyagawa (talk) 01:50, 28 December 2016 (UTC)
  • Sorry, these two have dragged on for a while. I'll do this one now and I promise to review the other one by the end of the weekend.

• Lead: Link Lyanna Mormont - I have a feeling that by the end of next season that she'll probably warrant her own article anyway! But for now the redirect will do the trick.
• Start off the second paragraph of the lead with "In this episode," Just to clarify that the paragraph is in-universe.
• Plot: Link Winterfell, Tommen Baratheon, King's Landing (A Song of Ice and Fire), Daenerys Targaryen, Euron Greyjoy
• Writing: A couple of bits of overlink: A Song of Ice and Fire, Ian McShane, Rory McCann.
• Casting: A fair bit of overlink in this section. Rory McCann, Clive Russell, third season, Ian McShane, Deadwood, Lyanna Mormont, Tim McInnerny, Bella Ramsay, Jerome Flynn and Bronn.
• Remaining overlink for the rest of the article is Maisie Williams in the third paragraph of filming, Blood of my Blood under ratings, and IGN in the second paragraph of critical reception.
• Ratings: Add the channels where possible.
• Critical reception: Break the large paragraph in two, starting a new paragraph with the Hitflix review.
• Same as the Blood of My Blood review, check the citations for appropriate italics. Newspapers like the Banbridge Leader and The Independent, as well as magazines like Entertainment Weekly should all be in italics.
• The image in the infobox - was that from the cold open? Because if it was then that's the way you can use it under fair use. I'd just change the caption to say something along the lines of "The character of Sandor Clegane was reintroduced in a cold open, to ensure that his presence in the episode was not given away by Rory McCann's name appearing in the opening titles." I'm sure you can word it better, but you get the idea. Then I think that fair use is entirely suitable.

• That's the lot, ping me back when you've had a chance to take a look. Miyagawa (talk) 00:38, 7 January 2017 (UTC)

@Miyagawa: All done. And I changed the picture, because the previous one was not from the cold open. - AffeL (talk) 01:37, 7 January 2017 (UTC)

Great, happy to promote. Miyagawa (talk) 11:43, 7 January 2017 (UTC)