Talk:The CEO Show with Robert Reiss

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I left a note on the original author's talk page, but this article is close to AFD unless it gets PROPERLY sources soon. It would be helpful if the original author would learn how to properly write an article (spacing, format, etc) here before continuing, as it makes the article even more messed up if you keep adding content that isn't relevent, in the wrong format. I would strongly suggest you find some 3rd party sources quickly (NOT pr.com and other radio and pr sites, which don't pass wp:rs. PHARMBOY (TALK) 15:53, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Again, I keep trying to help clean up this article to give it a fair shake, but you can't delete my formatting of wikilinks. Please put [[article name]] marks around a topic to wikilink it, don't use a full address, per Wikipedia Manual of Style. While it is fine to have all those wikilinks, there are still NO 3rd party references that pass Wikipedia's policy on reliable sources, which is required to avoid deletion. PHARMBOY (TALK) 18:26, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Looking better. I would strongly suggest paring down the list of interviews so it doesn't look just like it is a list of interviews, (about 1/2) and listing only the most important. I would also suggest creating a paragraph about the significance of what he does, with full citations (""time magazine called him the most important blah blah blah""" with citations. Then it is getting pretty close to ok. PHARMBOY (TALK) 19:17, 29 September 2008 (UTC)