Talk:The Chronicles of Riddick: Escape from Butcher Bay/GA2
Latest comment: 15 years ago by GamerPro64 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Hi there, I'm MacMed and I am going to be handling this review. Let's get started :) Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 23:13, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
Links
editThe links are mostly good, there's just a few issues that I listed below. Regards, MacMedtalkstalk 23:35, 13 August 2009 (UTC)
- The glitches link in the reception section is a redirect.
- The Vivendi Universal link in the first paragraph of Development is a redirect.
- The first Chronicles of Riddick' link in the same section is a redirect to the film article, though I think you meant to link it to an article about the video game franchise. Feel free to correct me if I am wrong about the target you want.
- The levels link in the Gameplay section is a redirect.
- The enhanced remake link in the lead is a redirect.
Article
editCould you put something about the development in the lead? It summarizes every section but that.
Everything is good, just waiting on the lead fix.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- What do I have to fix? GamerPro64 (talk) 20:16, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
- I think I fixed the lead. GamerPro64 (talk) 23:26, 14 August 2009 (UTC)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
I will do these tomorrow.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Congrats.
- Pass/Fail: