Talk:The Freeze
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editCurrently the this page is being re-vamped by myself. I know it is currently incomplete, I just need a few more days to finish the work and add citations, please do not change and just bear with me till it is done. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.109.0.209 (talk • contribs) 10:42, 21 September 2006
I am still very aware that they are errors and when I am done I will post so, so come can carefully point out the errors. Please bare with me this means alot to me and I would love to finish it on my own. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.109.0.209 (talk • contribs) 12:59, 22 September 2006
- I'm glad you are taking the time to improve the article, but don't forget the most important thing: the article must provide citations to "credible, third-party sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy" per WP:Verifiability and WP:Reliable sources. I would hate for the article to be deleted and all your hard work to be for naught, which could happen if the article is not properly cited. Thanks and good luck. --Satori Son 01:19, 23 September 2006 (UTC)
All of this information is from the "I hate tourist/don't forget me tommy" 7" liner notes written by Clif Hanger, the rest is from the book "American Hardcore". —Preceding unsigned comment added by 149.31.67.232 (talk • contribs) 02:48, 24 September 2006
NPOV problems
editHi. I'm from Cape Cod and it's nice that this article is up, but to make it fit in with wikipedia, it should really follow the Neutral Point of View guidelines. Much of this reads like a press release or promotional material. Not sure if anyone's still working on it, but I think there's a danger of articles getting deleted that don't comply: the goal is for wikipedia to read like a encyclopedia, not just random info. Good luck! Jrgsf (talk) 17:36, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
This page is bullshit. I love the Freeze, but I just can't believe the blatant advertising on this page. --SuperEditor (talk) 21:58, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
I don't get into too much of the behind the scenes "bullshit" anymore. BUT since the page is free for anyone to edit and, or, contribute to, I'm left wondering why THE BAND is being flagged for "potential misuse" of the site? Anyways, I've tried to "clean up" what SOME consider "blatant advertising", as The Freeze can and will live on despite or because of it... As always. Clif Hanger — Preceding unsigned comment added by 46.142.30.95 (talk) 11:44, 14 September 2011 (UTC)
Copyright problem removed
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How to improve this article
editI did some major clean-up, formatting, and added information based on what I know. Other things to do incluse:
- Band history: Who were the original members? Where were their first shows? When did they start touring? What was response like to their records? How did the band change over time?
- Band members: What years were various members active?
- Discography: What labels released these records? Also, check dates and formats.
- References: Many more needed to make this more than a start-class article.