Talk:The Great Milenko/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 21:19, 14 November 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• The alternative cover grossly fails WP:NFCC #3.a and #8. If you feel that the cover is important you can discuss it in the article, but it is simply a different colour, and is not needed.
• There is no section on singles, which there clearly should be, and it should be covered in the lead

Background and development

• Could you rename it 'Background', and the following section 'Recording', as they seem to be similar topics?
• This section doesn't lead anywhere, and doesn't even mention The Great Milenko in it

Recording process

• Change 'A&R' to artists and repertoire
• Hollywood Records can be linked earlier than it is
• "Bruce who knew very little about the Sex Pistols..." - comma after Bruce

Musical style

• Please trim File:Boogie Woogie Wu ICP.ogg to 26 seconds and lower the quality per WP:SAMPLE
• "Southwest Voodoo samples the track Voodoo by X-Clan." This sentence is unreferenced and given completely without context.

Promotion and release

• Mention the release dates here
  1. 63 → number sixty-three (or number 63)
• Likewise #1 → number one (not number 1)
• "Despite the rough start, The Great Milenko has old well over the years" - typo here?
• RIAA needs to be spelt out first (disregarding the lead), and a link
• You can link 'certified gold' to RIAA certification
• Ref 23 should go at end of sentence

Critical reception

• "critics complimented the albums improved sound" - apostrophe missing in "album's"

Track listing

• You don't need to cite each reference twice
• What is the second release?

Charts and certification

The 'Singles' table should be converted into prose earlier in the article

References

• The content of the 'Notes' and 'References' sections are around the wrong way

Looks like a good majority of these have been corrected already. I'll get started on shortening File:Boogie Woogie Wu ICP.ogg to 26 seconds and lowering the quality.--Gen. Quon (talk) 01:43, 18 November 2010 (UTC)

OK, I've shortened and lowered the quality of File:Boogie Woogie Wu ICP.ogg. I think everything else has been achieved.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:04, 21 November 2010 (UTC)

OK, I'm happy with improvements made. Passed! Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:36, 22 November 2010 (UTC)