Talk:The Lakes (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• " a midtempo indie ballad, " sea of blue.
• " in Windermere, the largest lake " natural lake.
• "has ever penned" written.
• "and UK Downloads" that's not it's formal name, it's "UK Singles Downloads Chart"
• "Kitty Committee Studio (Los Angeles)" is mentioned (unref) in the infobox and nowhere else.
• As is "Rough Customer Studio (New York City)".

Both of them are sourced in the album's liner notes, as stated in Personnel. BawinV (talk) 08:23, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

• Length of 3:47 is in infobox but nowhere else with no citation.
• "would come out at midnight" that same day. And how did she announce it?
• "Swift as imageries and visuals subconsciously" whaaaat? Let's try to keep it encyclopedic.
• " songs on folklore, "The " overlinked, and you need to be consistent about formatting that album title.
• "An aerial view..." that's a fragment, no full stop.
• "ballad[12] driven" gah, move that ref.
• " D3 to F♯4" links.
• "moderate tempo of" link.
• "located in the Lake District of the country." not "of the country".
• "around to tweet it"," you link tweet here, but not before, do it first time.
• "settings,[16][17][18][4] getting" ref order.
• "like the Lake Poets did.[19][13]" ref order, and probably no need for "did".
• Lots of "X of Y", you could mix it up a bit with "X writing in Y" or "Y's writer, X..." just to prevent the dozen or so "X of Y" you currently have.
• "the UK Downloads charts" use the real name.
• There's no ref here.
• Refs 13, 29, 41: spaced hyphen should be spaced en-dash.

That's my lot for the moment. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 21:37, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

 Done all. BawinV (talk) 08:23, 7 September 2021 (UTC)