Talk:The List (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 01:52, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Review

I've been reading the article and making some minor edits.

As a comment to the nominator, this X-Files articles seems to be suffering of a minor issue: overuse of the phrase "the episode" on following sentences. On a single paragraph, "the episode" might be changed to "it" on following sentences after the first one. Only after at leatst 4 sentences, it may be needed to reintroduce "the episode" to avoid the reader losing the pace. Also, if possible, the use of "the episode" may be left only to start a paragraph, and then changed by proper substitutions.

Lead

• Good

Plot

• Good

Reception

• Good

References

• Good

Verdict

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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—Hahc21 04:53, 23 June 2012 (UTC)