Talk:The Louvre (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:16, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

• for her sophomore album → According to Wikipedia's Manual of Style, "sophomore" shouldn't be used here; use "second" here
• indie rock and ambient music → Links to those genres
• It derives its name from the Louvre → Its name derives from the Louvre
• talk about Lorde's honest, lightly-manic analysis of a newly-sparked romance → this info should be in the article's body, so a ref wouldn't be needed here
• landing in several year-end lists → with it landing in several year-end lists
• "Born to Run" → add release year in brackets afterwards
• The track centers around themes of obsession and sacrifice as it continues the narrative established in the previous song, "Homemade Dynamite". → This should be in the first paragraph; I can't find this info in the article's body!
• and it is on the set list of her ongoing Melodrama World Tour (2017–2018). → It is currently part of the set list of her...

Infobox

• Flawless ;)

Recording and composition

• "The Louvre" at three different → "The Louvre" in three different
• additional production to the song → replace "song" with "track" here to avoid repeating yourself
• You should cite the album's liner notes at the end of the first paragraph
• "The Louvre" is described as a song about the early → "The Louvre" revolves with the early
• describe it as a "wide-eyed, heart-skippy pop" song → described it as a "wide-eyed, heart-skippy pop" track
• The track reveals the singer's → Its lyrics also reveal the singer's
• Picture > Don't know what "(Richelieu wing pictured)" should mean
• Everything else seems on point

Critical reception

• In a review roundup for The Fader → comma after "The Fader"
• to the The Cure → to the work of The Cure
• Stereogum placed the song as number 13 → Stereogum placed the recording at number 13
• but the song also served as a reminder → ,with the song serving as a reminder
• ranked the song at number 42 in its year-end list → ranked the track at number 42 in his year-end list
• Spin placed the song at number 9 on its year-end list → In Spin's year-end list, "The Louvre" was ranked at number nine
• calling the internal monologue → with the publication calling...

Live performances

• The box "titled back-and-forth above [the singer's] head." → This sentence doesn't make any sense
• giving the full performance a → giving it a (to avoid repeating yourself)
• a departure from the black chiffon → "a departure from" is not the right wording here

Credits and personnel

• Flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 18.7% is very good!

Media

• Images seems stable

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
• No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

• Apart from a few issues in the lead, the article seems to be in a very good shape. I've put it  On hold for 7 days! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:58, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

I just fixed the article using all your feedback. Thank you so much for reviewing this. Had no idea someone would pick it up so soon! De88 (talk) 15:55, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Gladly passing! Congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:10, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

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