Talk:The Monster of Phineas-n-Ferbenstein/GA1

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Warrior4321 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

In depth review

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Prose

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  • Along with the separate story, "Oil on Candace"
Along with a seperate story [...]
  • Written by Martin Olson and Jon Colton Barry, its storyboards
Written by Martin Olson and Jon Colton Barry, the storyboards
  • To occupy the time, the doctor tells Perry of his Victorian ancestor
To occupy the time, Doofenshmirtz tells Perry of his Victorian ancestor.
In a previous line, the article talks about Dr.Phineastein. Since there are two doctors, the article needs to specify which one.

Production

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  • Quoation marks are not needed over every term of The Monster of Phineas-n-Ferbenstein
  • The production section is weak
  • There is a paragraph with just two sentences
  • See the production section in Homer's Barbershop Quartet for more details.

Lead

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  • The paragraphs in the lead are too short.
  • There are too many paragraphs for an article of this size.

This article has a few problems, which I will give one week to fix. Thanks Warrior4321 01:41, 2 September 2009 (UTC)Reply

Since no efforts were made to try and fix the article, the article has failed the good article review. warrior4321 23:19, 9 September 2009 (UTC)Reply