Talk:The Myth of the Eastern Front/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Buidhe in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 12:41, 20 January 2020 (UTC)Reply


Some issues that I noticed:

  • The lead mentions "tendency to whitewash Red Army crimes." This seems undue since as far as I can tell only one review mentions this.
  • In the "Themes" section, the bullet points should be integrated into prose.
  • ENGVAR: mixes -ized and -ised spelling. Should consistently use United States spelling.
  • "opening of the Russian archives" Is it really Russian archives that are meant, or Soviet/Eastern Bloc archives—including Ukraine, Poland, etc.? buidhe 22:51, 20 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for pointing these out; I've addressed them as follows:

  1. Revised.
  2. Converted to prose.
  3. Standardised to American English.
  4. Removed "Russian" as unneeded per the rest of the sentence.

--K.e.coffman (talk) 00:48, 23 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Passing: This article meets standards on prose, coverage, focus, copyvio, original research, image relevance, and neutral point of view. Good work! buidhe 01:13, 23 January 2020 (UTC)Reply