Talk:The Old Man and the "C" Student/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 15:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• Indicate 6.9 million viewers watched the episode in the lead (some might not understand the Nielsen rating)
• Wikilink Milhouse and Martin
• Why does Homer's hatred of Bart cause him to fail miserably? It's been a while since I saw this episode
• Abe -> Grampa (change?)
• Last three sentences in cultural ref section need citations
• Make sure sentences with quotes end with citations
• Wikilink ref publishers (Pioneer Press etc)

Just make the above fixes and the article will be good to go!

Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:37, 27 June 2011 (UTC)

Looks great. Pass for GA Ruby2010 comment! 18:28, 27 June 2011 (UTC)