Talk:The Paper Bag Princess

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Carlsontemple in topic Proposed Changes

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Here's a source adding things about the book's creation and reception: [1] Mule hollandaise (talk) 23:54, 15 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

Wiki Education assignment: ENGL 273 - Children's Literature

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 13 January 2022 and 14 May 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Carlsontemple (article contribs).

Proposed Changes

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The Paper Bag Princess has been heralded as one of the first feminist picture books, as my research shows, but the Wikipedia article lacks an analysis section that discusses these themes. An addition to the analysis section would also be discussion of the story's role as an instructional tool for classrooms. Other areas of the article to improve are to remove extraneous details from the character section and reword confusing sentences as well as reword some of the run-on sentences in the plot section that also present a biased tone. Additionally, there are three sections of the article that are dedicated to references, external sites, and footnotes that I am looking to synthesize and simplify the presentation of sources. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carlsontemple/The_Paper_Bag_Princess/Bibliography Carlsontemple (talk) 13:12, 27 April 2022 (UTC)Reply