Talk:The Pegasus School

Doing research. Not a promotional article. Previous unsigned comment added by Yuliya1887.

Thank you for your contribution. I am not clear what you mean by "doing research"; if you are stating that you are currently gathering more information about the topic in order to improve the content of the article, then you are encouraged to do so. In addition to avoiding statements which are promotional in nature, the article must also cite reliable, third-party sources to verify the information and to establish the subject's notability. If such improvements can not be made, then the article may still be subject to deletion. Thanks! Davnor (talk) 20:03, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Added sources. It is a non-profit school, not a for-profit business. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Yuliya1887 (talk • contribs) 21:31, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

How is this article any different than any other private school listing on Wiki? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Yuliya1887 (talk • contribs) 21:39, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Do not delete. Compare to other schools, linked at the bottom, then please delete the delete box from the article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Yuliya1887 (talk • contribs) 21:57, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Generally, comparisons to other Wikipedia articles is not appropriate when evaluating a article; each article should be judged on its own merits, against Wikipedia's guidelines and policies. However, in this case it does raise a valid point. Stillwaterising has brought to my attention that articles on schools are generally not subject to speedy deletion under the cited criteria. As a result, the speedy deletion tag has been removed, and you are encouraged to continue your efforts to improve the article. Thanks! Davnor (talk) 22:12, 6 April 2010 (UTC)

Lead section

The "lead" (aka the intro) needs work. Please see Wikipedia:Lead section. - Stillwaterising (talk) 16:05, 7 April 2010 (UTC)