Talk:The Personal
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Elmidae in topic Neutrality of article disputed
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Neutrality of article disputed
editI would like to know in which section of this article is the neutrality disputed in order to adress the problem.Archibald Riverdale (talk) 19:15, 10 January 2019 (UTC)
- The two most obvious examples: lede contains long quote intended to promote rather than summarize; and criticism section goes to substantial lengths (again using lots of in-house quotes) to show how completely everything is now hunky-dory and that there really was no problem in the first place. There is a clear promotional slant to the representation throughout the article. --Elmidae (talk · contribs) 14:00, 13 January 2019 (UTC)