Talk:The Place Beyond the Pines/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts 17:05, 5 September 2020 (UTC)

Lead/Infobox

• Both look good

Plot

• It's a bit ridiculous, but the plot is just one word in violation of WP:FILMPLOT. It presently sits at 701 words. Tinker with the section to get it under the 700 word maximum.

Y - Done

Cast

(Issues will also be covering the Casting section)

• A few of the names should be cited. Ex: Here's one for Rose Byrne (Has some interesting info in regards to her replacing Greta Gerwig in the role). It can also be used to cite Mahershala Ali.

Y - Done, added citations for the names not mentioned in the casting section. I also mentioned Greta Gerwig in the casting section.

• There's still a few names I feel should be cited. I found ones for Ray Liotta and Eva Mendes.
  • Y - Thanks, this has been added

Production

• The image of the director's caption should detail something about the film.

Y - Done

Reception

• I feel the top ten list section should have each individual outlet's source be used instead of an umbrella Metacritic citation.

Y - Done, only the source for 'Den of Geek' couldn't be found, so I put the Metacritic source there

• The box office section seems to hold information that would fall more under a Release section. I'd suggest making the Reception section Release, separate the box office info into it's own subsection and if possible track down any information on home media release.
  • Y - Ah yes, I've added some info about the home media. I've renamed 'Reception' to 'Release' too and rearranged a paragraph. Thanks. L150 13:25, 7 September 2020 (UTC)

References

• Archive all sources. This is especially important as there's a frequently used source in the article, so having an archive in the event the link goes dead would be necessary.

Y - Done

Thank you for reviewing! All the above has been done for now. L150 18:55, 6 September 2020 (UTC)

@Lizzy150: Right on. Just gonna give another look through the article for any other potential issues. Rusted AutoParts 19:01, 6 September 2020 (UTC)

I believe that's a ✓ Pass. Good work. Rusted AutoParts 17:51, 7 September 2020 (UTC)