Talk:The Problem Solvers/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk) 07:12, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

Give me a little while to read the article, but something that strikes me at once is that there are three citations to IMDb in here that need to be replaced. Courcelles (talk) 07:12, 6 July 2010 (UTC)

Josh Fadem, notable or not? You've redlinked him in the infobox and Plot, but not in the lede.

Removed links. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 18:08, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

"Riggi's second 30 Rock directed episode, having" Can we try that again- it reads quite clunkily as written.

How 'bout now?

Better.

"Margaret Lyons of Entertainment Weekly enjoyed Jack McBrayer's performance." The caption should make it clearer that the picture is McBrayer, and not Lyons.

Margaret Lyons is a woman, Jack McBrayer is a man. I highly doubt someone will be confused by this.

Maybe I'm just blind, but until I opened up the image page, I couldn't tell what gender the person was. No one ever accused me of being good at that, though. Courcelles (talk) 18:32, 9 July 2010 (UTC)

Ref 21 needs the author given.

Added.

The major problem though is the IMDb cites. Courcelles (talk) 23:39, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

Replaced.

• Well, then, let's not waste any more time- this was the one that mattered per the GA criteria. Passed. Courcelles (talk) 18:32, 9 July 2010 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review, it is most appreciated. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 18:40, 9 July 2010 (UTC)