Talk:The Satanic Bible/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by GorillaWarfare in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 05:30, 2 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

I'll give this one a whirl and see what I can learn.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:30, 2 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
Why are some of the citations missing page numbers?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 09:52, 2 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
The Schreck citations are to a website that lacks page numbers. The LaVey citations that are missing page numbers are from previous editions of the Satanic Bible to which I do not have access. I have a PDF file that contains all of the introductions to the various editions, but the page numbers do not correspond to those in the original versions. GorillaWarfare (talk) 20:31, 12 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
This is not a big issue in the current version. Just a few refs are at issue. If this goes to WP:FAC, you will have to track everything down. I won't hold it up over this although it is not really resolved.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:56, 13 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
Understood. I'll see what I can do about it, and will keep that in mind if I try to get it to be a featured article. GorillaWarfare (talk) 16:10, 13 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

The article has a choppy organization. The two- and three-line sections should be expanded or merged.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:02, 8 January 2012 (UTC)Reply

You have expanded some sections. It would still help if the Preface, The Book of Satan and The Book of Leviathan were expanded.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 13 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
I'll see what I can do :] I've found a good number of new sources which I'm trying to work in. I'm also expanding the Reception section to make it a bit more balanced; I hadn't realized how slanted it was towards negative reactions before. This may take me a few days, as I'm working on this around schoolwork as well. GorillaWarfare (talk) 16:10, 13 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
Let me know when you are done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 05:45, 14 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
Alright, I think I'm done! GorillaWarfare (talk) 02:59, 17 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
The WP:LEAD now checks in at 3452 characters of readable prose. For an article this length it should probably be about 2500 and anything longer than 3000 is excessive. Please cut the LEAD down to less than 3000 characters. Everything else looks good.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:05, 17 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
Ah, okay. I have done so. GorillaWarfare (talk) 15:43, 17 January 2012 (UTC)Reply
WP:LEAD
History
Dedication
Introductions
The Book of Lucifer
Reception