Talk:The Shadow of the Past/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Lead

• "in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"?
  • No, in that pair of years.
• Mention Frodo's last name.
  • Done.

History

• Link philologist.
  • Linked.
• "in 1954–55" → "from 1954–55"
  • As above.
• "young cousin Bingo" Bingo? This needs a in square brackets explanation.
  • Glossed.
• In "The crucial chapter", capitalize the races (hobbits, elfs), unless it was done intentionally?
  • Hey, did you miss this? Everything else is done, so as soon as this is addressed the article can be passed. AryKun (talk) 09:08, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
    • Ah yes, done.
• "protagonist, Frodo" → Add last name.
  • Done.

Plot

• "The wizard Gandalf" → In other articles, I've seen you capitalize Wizard as well.
  • Done.
• Link Isildur.
  • Moved link to first mention.
• "a hobbit" → Capitalize.
  • Done.

Structure

• I don't see "there and back again" in the Tor.com review?
  • Ah yes, it's in the alternative version, the same thoughts presented in a table, which I've added to the citation.

Misc

• All the refs are reliable and spot-checks on the ones I could access found that they supported what they were used to cite.
  • Noted.
• I would suggest adding alt text to the images, although it isn't required for GA. AryKun (talk) 05:04, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
  • All right, added.

I think that's all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:24, 25 January 2022 (UTC)