Talk:The Show Where Sam Shows Up
Latest comment: 12 years ago by George Ho in topic GA Review
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Family
editWere jokes about Frasier not having mentioned Niles and saying his father was dead references to retconning his family background when starting "Frasier"?
"becomes aghasted"
editMaybe someone who's seen the episode could improve this.--Wetman (talk) 01:04, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
How is "aghasted" not the right word? Frasier is pissed by Roz's flirting on his friend Sam. --George Ho (talk) 02:18, 7 July 2012 (UTC)- Whether it is a right word or not, I removed mentions about Roz as irrelevant, as she hasn't done anything significant in this episode. --George Ho (talk) 02:27, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 03:21, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
Issues:
- Infobox: Remove notes from who it is produced by
Removed "Producer" parameter. --George Ho (talk) 04:27, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox: Suppose to be running time without commercials, not with
Why? This is not BBC. --George Ho (talk) 04:27, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox: Remove "Season 2 episodes" area, and add to episode list with Frasier (season 2) then List of Frasier episodes below it on a different line.
- Removed. --George Ho (talk) 04:27, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Summarize every section per WP:LEAD, mainly summarize the "Reception" section
- Done. --George Ho (talk) 04:33, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Link American to Television in the United States
- Done. --George Ho (talk) 04:33, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Link sitcom
- Done. --George Ho (talk) 04:33, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Lede: Remove unneeded comma before Frasier
- Done. --George Ho (talk) 04:33, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: Remove File:Martin Rises from the Dead Show Where Sam Shows Up.jpg. It doesn't help me understand article at all.
- This is text-only image, which is uploaded in Commons. --George Ho (talk) 04:27, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: Remove File:A Dirty Little Secret Frasier Sam Shows Up.jpg. It doesn't help me understand article at all.
- This is text-only image, which is uploaded in Commons. --George Ho (talk) 04:27, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- Production: Or, rather a lack of one. Considering that this is a rather short article to begin with, a production section is a must. You mention that the episode was written by "by Ken Levine and David Isaacs, and directed by James Burrows. And, the producer of the show. That's a start; can you expand on this? Filming locations? Costs? Guest stars? Really, this area is critical to passing a GA, because it proves that the article is broad in its coverage. Or other stuff. Please, don't make the "Production" area one one sentence. One created, It must be summarized in the main paragraph
- I've turned it into a "note 3".
- I've
- Reception: Unneeded comma before Cheers
- Done --George Ho (talk) 04:39, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
- References: Split into two columns by using the following code: {{Reflist|2}}
Helpful in other browsers, but not Internet Explorer 9, as it doesn't split in mine. --George Ho (talk) 04:39, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
Good work. On hold. TBrandley 04:01, 7 July 2012 (UTC)