Talk:The Smith Family (charity)

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It looks like a large part of this page has been lifted verbatim from the Smith Family website.

Elronxenu (talk) 05:37, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

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I'm a strong supporter of the Smith Family, but this page reads as an advertisement not just for them but by them. Does anyone know their operations, history and aims well enough, but also dispassionately, to write a real article on them? Craig Wilcox 3 Feb 09 Which Smith family are you referring to? OlEnglish (talk) 04:41, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Substituted at 18:40, 17 July 2016 (UTC)

Unbiased and neutral wording

The page reads as advertising for the charity, with emotive language suitable for advertisements or the "about us" page on a website . This page needs to be rewritten — Preceding unsigned comment added by JOSHUA4230 (talk • contribs) 03:37, 25 September 2018 (UTC)