Talk:The Social Network/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rusted AutoParts 20:05, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

I'll pick this one up. Allow me some time to analyze the page and see what needs to be improved. Rusted AutoParts 20:05, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

• Lead/Infobox
  • Lead could use a paragraph about the production of the film, so as to encapsulate the article as a whole.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

• • A source for it screening at the New York FIlm Festival needed. Should also be noted in the Release section, as it had it's first screening at NYFF. Rusted AutoParts 23:11, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

• Plot
  • Under 700 maximum to satisfy WP:FILMPLOT, good on this end.

 Done, plot is 549 words Chompy Ace 01:41, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

• • "Returning to his dorm, Zuckerberg writes an insulting entry about Albright on his LiveJournal blog" I think "entry" should be changed to "post".

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

• • "In depositions, the Winklevoss twins claim that Zuckerberg stole their idea, while Saverin claims his shares of Facebook were unfairly diluted when the company was incorporated", perhaps a "separate" could be added between "In" and "depositions".

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

• Cast
  • Should probably source all the names in this section for consistency.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 02:13, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

• Production
  • Casting: A) Rashida Jones should probably be mentioned in this section. She has a source in the Cast section so it can be used here too. B) "Casting began in mid-2009, with Jesse Eisenberg, Justin Timberlake and Andrew Garfield cast" -> "Casting began in mid-2009, with Jesse Eisenberg, Justin Timberlake and Andrew Garfield announced to star".

 Done and  Done Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

• Marketing
  • Is there any other marketing details worth noting that you can find? Like a notable promotional campaign, something under those lines. If not, that's okay.

• Couldn't find much information not already in the section. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

• Release
  • I think the Critical response section could use a few more reviews, to help highlight the critical response towards the noted "Fincher's direction, the performances (particularly that of Eisenberg), screenplay, editing and score".

 Done A paragraph based on the claims has been added. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 02:32, 19 December 2020 (UTC)

• Accolades
  • All good.

• Historical accuracy
  • All good.

• Legacy
  • All good.

• Possible sequel
  • Any updates on sequel news if any?

• Added some additional information. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

• References
  • Reference 16 only one that isn't archived.

 Done Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 01:14, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Submitting my first few notes. Will add some more upon closer look. Rusted AutoParts 00:12, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Added what I think are my final notes. Rusted AutoParts 23:08, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

@Rusted AutoParts: Done. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:45, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

✓ Pass Rusted AutoParts 23:56, 22 December 2020 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.