Talk:The Stag Convergence/GA2

GA Reassessment

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I was just going to trim the plot for this article, but upon reading it I decided the prose was not at Good article standard. For example: Grammatical errors

• Raj proposes bringing strippers to the party, but Howard turns it down and tells that he promised Bernadette that there would be no strippers in his party.
• At the bachelor party, Sheldon has a couple of words, shared with Wil Wheaton, on being Howard's friend.
• Stuart tells Howard that he has everything and that he is very unhappy living in the back of comic book store.
• A drunk Raj tells everyone how Howard is his best friend, that when he came to America he was very lonely, but on finding Howard, he found out they could be lonely together.
• He finishes up with the stories about Howard losing his virginity to his second cousin, having a threesome with him and a Sailor Moon girl at ComicCon and Leonard and Raj paying for a Jewish role-playing prostitute in Las Vegas (to cheer him up after he was dumped by Leslie Winkle)
• Howard had not told her about all his sex addict past and his past relationships.
• At first Howard keeps calling Bernadette and cannot get any good advice about women from his friends.
• Howard gives Penny a message for Bernadette that he was sorry, that he also does not like the man he used to be and that he is a better man because of her.

Also many of the sentences do not really make sense unless you have some inside knowledge (I presume).

• As the toasts begin, most of Sheldon's jokes fall flat though he does give Howard a "double bazinga" about caring about his pending marriage and still wishes Howard good luck.
• She is also upset at Penny, since she set them up knowing about his past, causing her to run into her bedroom.

And some don't appear to serve any purpose

• Stuart Bloom (Kevin Sussman) tries borrowing some money from Leonard to pay for the evening due to his limited monetary situation
• Amy asks if she has a cousin that she can have sex with to get even with him.

That is just the plot summary, which is also too detailed about minor incidents and assumes too much knowledge of the programme (I didn't even know who he was going to be married to untill near the end). AIRcorn (talk) 10:40, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I passed this a long while ago. Looking back, the prose is still really bad. I think it just seemed a lot better compared to what it was. Do with it what you'd like.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 14:57, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

Delisted Problems still remain. AIRcorn (talk) 08:14, 22 November 2012 (UTC)