Talk:The Sweetest Apu/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 15:56, 6 June 2011 (UTC)

I will review soon. Ruby2010 comment! 15:56, 6 June 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• "It is up to Marge, Homer and Apu try to keep his wife Manjula from learning his secret." Word missing
• Add character wikilinks in plot section
• Identify how John Swartzwelder and Matthew Nastuk related to series (producers? staff writers? etc)
• "On August 24, 2010, "The Sweetest Apu" was released as part of The Simpsons: The Complete Thirteenth Season DVD and Blu-ray set. Al Jean, Ian Maxtone-Graham, Matt Selman, Tim Long, Dan Castellaneta, James Lipton and Matt Warburton participated in the audio commentary of the episode." Needs ref
• Make sure you use two sets of quotations marks in quoting critics (example: "he said 'Sweetest' was good")
• Provide wikilinks for DVD Verdict and DVD Talk.
• A screenshot would really jazz up the article, but it is not required for this review to pass
• The lead needs ratings data summary

Just make the needed changes above, and the article will be good to go. This review is now on hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 16:16, 6 June 2011 (UTC)

A screenshot should not be added to decorate the article. See #1 and #8 of the Wikipedia:Non-free content criteria. Theleftorium ^(talk) 16:42, 6 June 2011 (UTC)

I think I have fixed everything now. I've also added an image that I think fits the article. Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 16:56, 6 June 2011 (UTC)

• Looks great. The image has a good rationale and its use seems justified for this article. Pass for GA. Nice work! Ruby2010 comment! 18:45, 6 June 2011 (UTC)