Talk:The Target (The Office)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 15:55, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

• I don't remember if I've asked you or not, but do you include production shots of the episode in the infobox? If not, the article could use a photo of one of the actors.

I never learned how to include production shots, but I will add one of the actors. -- NoD'ohnuts (talk) 22:05, 23 January 2013 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts

• "so he can go to Philadephia to help with his sports marketing job." -- Might want to explain this a little or note the episode in which he took that job.
• " drops Dunder Mifflin as their paper supplier, leaving them simultaneously excited over getting that last complaint and disappointed over losing a client." -- Two copy-editing notes here: "their" as used here should be "his" or "her," and "them" should be changed. I believe it's referring to the Office characters, but right now it seems to be referring to the client who dropped Dunder Mifflin.
• "In the second 60-second clip, Robert comes by the office..." I don't think a Robert has been mentioned yet. Robert who? Robert California?
• "This made "The Target" the lowest rated episode of the series, tying with "Here Comes Treble"." -- Why was this? Was it the night when some new shows premiered? The Office usually rates well, the reason for the difference and who beat them should be noted.

• There is no certain explanation for this. -- NoD'ohnuts (talk) 22:05, 23 January 2013 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts

• Dup link tool shows two results: Angela Kinsley and Oscar Nunez.
• No disambiguation links detected. External links all seem to be functioning, as well.

Will await your responses. —Ed!^(talk) 16:08, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

Excellent work. Passing the GA. —Ed!^(talk) 03:38, 28 January 2013 (UTC)